Thursday 17 November 2011

Out in the cold black scary space

On one fine perfect day Toikura that’s the person who’s writing this story and my friends Latoya and patty always wanted to go to a really scary dark damp place called space we said that it had lots of adventures to discover and present to people that don’t know much about space and all the things that are in there either. The next day we wrote our parents a note or letter to tell them that we went to space that really cool place that scares people.
We got all the things we needed to take with us when our parents read the letter my mother screamed and my father said “wow!!! I can not believe it!” there going into space. When we had everything we had we went to a place where all the astronauts went to go inside there rockets and other stuff. Off we go we got everything we need to survive this discovery of space.
Finally we got to the world of space and it looked really cool and great. Once we got there we saw lots of planet and other things too we saw Uranis, Jupiter, Venus, Pluto, Saturn, the moon, the sun (but a bit further so we don’t get burned), Mercury, asteroids, stars of course, and more.
It was so fun looking at planets and stuff hopefully we will see if we can go on different kind of planets not just the moon so after the moon we went on the most stormiest planet ever. That planet is called Jupiter except we had a warning on or space computer it said that it was really to stormy for us.
Then it said that we needed to get out of there or else we will get blown up into little pieces. Then after that our parents would not know where we are and then they might come and have to look for us but if we brang  a phone witch we did we could just call the and tell them that this might be there last day in the world and they have to have a funeral for us too.
But soon enough we got out of there and we went to a different plant the coldest planet ever and if you and your friends go to outer space then you would freeze to your death and stay frozen until you find a way to get out while your all covered in ice.
We went to Pluto it looked so light and blue because it is blue light blue. When we got out of the rocket it was cold but we had a suit on so we were very warm and cosy. Once we finished looking we went back into space.
We looked at a lot of planets and learned about other planets we had a lot of fun too. Time to move on to the next planet called patty wanted to go home and Latoya was hungry I knew what to do with Latoya’s one I gave her something to eat.
But the one thing didn’t know was what should I do with patty. She really wanted to go home so I said “wait patty and quiet” and she did. But the most important thing she wanted to do was that she really wanted to go home so I said yes after we discover other planets.
Then patty said “ok then”. After that we searched a planet that most astronauts go to can you figure it out ok let me give you a clue it is the closest to the earth and it is the colour grey what is that planet. Yes it is, the moon the closest planet to earth and yes of corse it is. That is the reason why we are going to that planet that goes around the sun and the moon. Meanwhile patty was hungry too Latoya ate too much so I had nothing well I got something I was hiding the food where they would never look so they wouldn’t eat all my food that I brang for me and them but they were still hungry.
Next we all wanted to discover the next planet this planet was light blue and was close to Saturn this planet was one of the big planets not the dwarf planets it was Uranis the big blue planet it looked like it was as cold as Pluto the coldest planet in the whole universe.
We were as happy to see different kinds of planets because we always wanted to but patty of course always didn’t want to stay in space for too long because e we know that she will get scared but after a while we got to Uranis and guess what she was scared but I told her not to be afraid and to face her fear of space.
It was so cool in Uranis we learnt lots about space, stars, planets and the solar system. But now we have to go back home and probably when we get home our parents will ground us for going in space without there permission for like about 3,2 weeks or months.
So we went home flying past some of the planets that we didn’t go to but except for the sun because we would be burnt in one second. So we all got home and our parents said nothing when they were going to say something we already said what we thought they were going to say but they didn’t they said that it was the best thing that there children has ever done inside there family so when they said that we all ran up to them and then we said that we loved them and we baked cake and muffins.

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