Introducing Toikura

Hey everyone


My name is Toikura
My age is 10 and
I am just about to leave to M.I
Which stands for manurewa intermediate
I love butter chicken and i like Ice-cream too.
I have three sisters and two brother's
My school now is clendon park school
but i am sure to leave and go to m.i


I was born in middle more hospital and raised in taraniki
in seven years of time i had moved houses to New Zealand clendon manurewa
and lived in and new house with a new school called clendon park school
as i grew i was have to be a helpful person to my new friends and now
i am turning 11 in Feb.
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What a Wedding

Hey everyone

Have you heard of a wedding before?

Well I have It’s the most beautiful thing in the world.

A wedding is when you celebrate with your family and have a great time.

But the worst part of the wedding is the part when they kiss each other and I know that some children hate that part of a wedding.

Isn’t that grose or what. Well people like the part when it’s cake time just like me I like cake time too.

They like cake time becase they get the most out of the adults.

Sometimes we just play and the adults dance or have a talk.

Finally it’s time for us to go home now and then they have their honeymoon.

When there honeymoon is over they have a baby.

Sharah Narative

One cold dark Sarah crept towards the door. She slowly reached out and opened the door to a really spooky place. Sarah didn’t go in but when her mean brother came down stairs he pushed her into the world but he came with her too. They heard heaps of noises they were the sounds of wolfs then they saw something run past it was a vampire because vampires run fast, very fast. They didn’t know how to get out of that world so they had a very long adventure after that very long adventure they saw a big massive blue door. They opened it and took them back to there home sweet home.
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The mean castle of doom

Once upon a time their was a teenager. Her name was Emily.When one day she found a castle she stared at it. Then she had a look to see and stepped inside. when suddenly a monster saw her then she got chaut by him.The monster took to his room to cook her and boil her all up then he was going to eat her and she didn’t like what he said when they were walking to his room. It was a long way to his room. Finally they got there he got the pot ready for her when suddenly he saw something else he liked to see another boy that was going to save the girl. But the girl didn’t see him.the monster had 2 pots one that could cook peopel and one that could take powerful peopel’s power away. And the monster put the teenager in the wrong pot because the teenager swaped the pots over on the other sides and she didn’t know that could take away her powers. she got out of the castle she tryed to use her powers and she said nooooooooooo. Then she knew the the spell to get her powers back. The only way is to say themagic word abra cidabra give my powers back and it worked. A while after that she was looking for a car the first car was a ice cream truck she said nah , the next car was a trackter that was a no too. But the last car was a limo that she said yes oh yes i want that limo right over there.While she was driving she saw a boy and gave him a ride but no’t a ride at home she asked him some quesions and he answered them all right.Then along caame the evil minone and his evil helpers.They want to rule the world. They try and defeat him but hes to strong.

A cotton candy monster

One kreepy night 2 girls named Miley and Lily there parents Billy Ray Cyrus and grace Cyrus were going to fairyland and candy land.They were very proud to go there but there was a problem with that they wanted  to check the rides just incase they fall off so they brangea bag full of tools to fix the rides.The girls kept fixing and as they were they were getting tired  and more tired man they were getting sick of it. Finally they were finished there work and they were home and not ready yet  their parents were ready and wide awake but they wern’t they were very sleepy as. There parents were really disappointed in them very much. When they went to both of those places they saw something pink it was a cotten candy monster Miley thourgt of an idea but Lily didn’t want to know it she was to scared so she just told her to eat it. They thourght it was yummy.

Out in the cold black scary space

On one fine perfect day Toikura that’s the person who’s writing this story and my friends Latoya and patty always wanted to go to a really scary dark damp place called space we said that it had lots of adventures to discover and present to people that don’t know much about space and all the things that are in there either. The next day we wrote our parents a note or letter to tell them that we went to space that really cool place that scares people.

We got all the things we needed to take with us when our parents read the letter my mother screamed and my father said “wow!!! I can not believe it!” there going into space. When we had everything we had we went to a place where all the astronauts went to go inside there rockets and other stuff. Off we go we got everything we need to survive this discovery of space.

Finally we got to the world of space and it looked really cool and great. Once we got there we saw lots of planet and other things too we saw Uranis, Jupiter, Venus, Pluto, Saturn, the moon, the sun (but a bit further so we don’t get burned), Mercury, asteroids, stars of course, and more.

It was so fun looking at planets and stuff hopefully we will see if we can go on different kind of planets not just the moon so after the moon we went on the most stormiest planet ever. That planet is called Jupiter except we had a warning on or space computer it said that it was really to stormy for us.

Then it said that we needed to get out of there or else we will get blown up into little pieces. Then after that our parents would not know where we are and then they might come and have to look for us but if we brang  a phone witch we did we could just call the and tell them that this might be there last day in the world and they have to have a funeral for us too.

But soon enough we got out of there and we went to a different plant the coldest planet ever and if you and your friends go to outer space then you would freeze to your death and stay frozen until you find a way to get out while your all covered in ice.

We went to Pluto it looked so light and blue because it is blue light blue. When we got out of the rocket it was cold but we had a suit on so we were very warm and cosy. Once we finished looking we went back into space.

We looked at a lot of planets and learned about other planets we had a lot of fun too. Time to move on to the next planet called patty wanted to go home and Latoya was hungry I knew what to do with Latoya’s one I gave her something to eat.

But the one thing didn’t know was what should I do with patty. She really wanted to go home so I said “wait patty and quiet” and she did. But the most important thing she wanted to do was that she really wanted to go home so I said yes after we discover other planets.

Then patty said “ok then”. After that we searched a planet that most astronauts go to can you figure it out ok let me give you a clue it is the closest to the earth and it is the colour grey what is that planet. Yes it is, the moon the closest planet to earth and yes of corse it is. That is the reason why we are going to that planet that goes around the sun and the moon. Meanwhile patty was hungry too Latoya ate too much so I had nothing well I got something I was hiding the food where they would never look so they wouldn’t eat all my food that I brang for me and them but they were still hungry.

Next we all wanted to discover the next planet this planet was light blue and was close to Saturn this planet was one of the big planets not the dwarf planets it was Uranis the big blue planet it looked like it was as cold as Pluto the coldest planet in the whole universe.

We were as happy to see different kinds of planets because we always wanted to but patty of course always didn’t want to stay in space for too long because e we know that she will get scared but after a while we got to Uranis and guess what she was scared but I told her not to be afraid and to face her fear of space.

It was so cool in Uranis we learnt lots about space, stars, planets and the solar system. But now we have to go back home and probably when we get home our parents will ground us for going in space without there permission for like about 3,2 weeks or months.

So we went home flying past some of the planets that we didn’t go to but except for the sun because we would be burnt in one second. So we all got home and our parents said nothing when they were going to say something we already said what we thought they were going to say but they didn’t they said that it was the best thing that there children has ever done inside there family so when they said that we all ran up to them and then we said that we loved them and we baked cake and muffins.

My Dream to become a ......

 

When I grow up I want to be an actress. I want to be an actress   because I want to be able to give money to the people that have no food to give to there children and to feed themselves.

To do this I have to go to university and go to a place where they shoot people to do an act for them. Also I need to make a great act for them to let me be in there show and do a performance for the poor people.

If I had a wish I would wish that I could get the part for the act. Then I would wish that I could go to the poor people houses and give them money to go to places and shops to do shopping for there kids.

A Great Guyforks night with my Family.

Phew phew phew as the fireworks lit the sky with bright lights I got so excited that I started to jump up and down and scream like a little girl. For a while I stood there in amazement. Me and my sisters were taking pictures while my nephew Genesis was getting kind of scared because he was only one years old.

My brother in law was setting the fireworks off and he was kind of dangerous with them because he was setting the firework off at the wrong time. After an hour our neighbors started to set their fireworks off as well. Our family was the first people to light the fireworks on our street because I think they didn’t have any or some people didn’t want to light up their fireworks.

We had 1 big box of fireworks that took us about 2 hours to finish them. They were all fantastic and my family really enjoyed them. I loved the time when everyone started to get up and slap each other.

I had a really great time and I wish to do the same next year but with heaps of fireworks and without the slapping on the face.

Welcome to Toikura's World

Hi Everyone

What you are going to see in my blog is what adventures I have been doing for my writing this term. You will be reading my stories and writing comments on all of my stories. I encourage my writing with my lovely teacher miss Clements and do lots of work with writing and work hard on weather i know my writing is good or weather it's not.

I write about all my great adventurous adventures and all the days that were the most special day I've had. I have been adding more detail into my writing and i have made more interesting stories using these things

• Simile's
• Adjectives
• Interesting words

and heaps more things that I know to put in my written language. I would like you to go on clendons clever clan and lok at everyones posts on there page .

In my conclusion I would really like to thank you for reading my page of stories.

2011 Athletic's Day!

On Friday 4th November it was athletics day, we hit to the field to our houses we went, while everyone went to there houses there in. We hurry to get there with boring faces and when all classes came we started athletics day.

Then straight into it we did the first of the house points. Next we went straight into racing, "starting off we will have all the five year old girls to the starting line" called out Mr Dawson with the microphone. These were the rest of the junior races.

We had

• five year old boys
• six, girls & boys
• seven, girls & boys
• eight, girls & boys

and last but not least nine year old girls& boys. They were so fast that it finally went to the ten year old intermediate girls and boys 100 metre race. I was so excited that it was my turn to race fort he year six girls but until then i still came third place in that race. But for a start there at least Latoya came first.

Then came the next races were the senior races. in first place was Jasmine and second place was Allanah.

After that was the oldest people of this school the year seven and eights.

We had the most wonderful races after all the finalist were after the teachers vs students.IT WAS ON at athletics day all the house points were added up and the wining house once again was Miro house with he highest score. It was very fun at athletics day for most, and we had the most fun there.

At the end the classes did there normal work as usual before the home bell rang.The most beautiful day ever.

I also hope we do athletics day in intermediate school too.